Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Humorous Piece Author's Note

First of all, please excuse my lack of artistic ability. I hope this comic makes sense. There are some aspects that are pretty specific to the situation itself, but there are also some themes that work with the larger issue of dishonesty in academic communities. I'm open to any suggestions on how to make it funnier or more effective. Thanks!
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8 comments:

  1. natalienApril 22, 2009 at 12:48 PM

    This piece is very funnay and the point will be clear to the intended audience.

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  2. Tara FApril 22, 2009 at 12:48 PM

    I still think your comic is hilarious, even after I read it 4 times. I would be still try to elaborate on his facial features to make him look a little more untrustworthy and sly.

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  3. EllieApril 22, 2009 at 12:48 PM

    I really liked your cartoon! Having the professor lecturing and showing the kids thoughts was a good idea. I think your topic/argument is a little unclear from the cartoon though. Maybe make it a little MORE obvious.

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  4. Lacy P.April 22, 2009 at 12:49 PM

    I had not heard of this current event but I think it was an awesome argument to choose. I loved how you even went into detail about the child making each of them with different haircuts! After explaining to me your argument,I thought your cartoon was hillarious...esp. about the fourth grader.

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  5. Rachel K.April 22, 2009 at 12:50 PM

    I really liked your drawing for your humerous piece. It was a creative interpretation of what actually happened at the university and my favorite part of it was the thought bubbles and the comments about what was going on. I think it is plenty funny!

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  6. Cameron KApril 22, 2009 at 12:51 PM

    I liked your drawing alot, they were good. The nice things about yours is that you dont have to search for the humor if you know what the topic is.

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  7. Matt PalomboApril 22, 2009 at 12:53 PM

    I think it done well! Your artistic ability is a lot better than mine... I am sure that comes across really well to the intended audience because I don't know anything about your topic however I still thought it was funny.

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  8. Kristen WilsonApril 22, 2009 at 12:55 PM

    your humerous piece was really good! Its simple and to the point and easy to understand! it was also really funny and had great detail in the drawings! I dont really have any suggestions.

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